Wednesday, 11 May 2016

Toroa Editing Checklist

Introduction

One short, sharp sentence - three words or less.

One long, interesting sentence - eight words or more.


Anywhere in Your Story

At least one of the following...

Simile, e.g. He was as big as an elephant.

Metaphor, e.g. The teacher stomped towards us, an elephant on a rampage.

Alliteration, e.g. The salty sea swept across the shore...


Peer Feedback

Swap books or Chromebooks with a buddy. Write two bits of feedback in your buddy's book:

I like the way you...
One thing you might improve is...   

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